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You came to me-
a sinner with wild eyes
and saw me as an angel.


I had flowers in my hair,
you had blood on your hands.


You saw my love as a halo
circling my flyaway hair
and thought my forgiveness to be wings
that could lift my frail body into the air.


But I got down next to you
on hands and knees
and showed you the slits in my soul,
the imperfections marring my body.


Yet you still looked at me with wonder in your eyes
saying my heart was still more pure than a human's would be.


And slipping my small hands in between yours
blood slid between them,
staining my hands along with yours
and I promised you
I'd save you if you saved me, too.


And together we were a beautiful disaster.

Monday, 23 November 2015

Another Trissa poem ^-^ (Tris + Rissa)
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cmccullen Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  New Deviant
Love it!!
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Vehement-Crusade Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Professional Artist
..... incredible 
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Ihmispesukarhu Featured By Owner May 26, 2016
Very beautiful! :)
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RJBG Featured By Owner May 16, 2016
Incredible work!
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VanePyroRocker Featured By Owner May 9, 2016  Student General Artist
. . . -stands up and claps. This is so fuc**** beautiful. <333333333333
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AM-Media-Arts Featured By Owner May 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
whoa I really like how you did this o.o
like how you had the "you" on the left and the "I" on the right, it's really cool!!!
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Daghrgenzeen Featured By Owner May 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
"--and I promised you
I'd save you if you saved me, too.--"
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Btworld69 Featured By Owner May 6, 2016
Yea true that to be angels in human form they taken the suffering of the weak and through compassion and understanding taken the weak's suffering as their own. the character development.

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Yuukon Featured By Owner May 6, 2016   Photographer
Beautifully written, I absolutely love how you can read it in several different ways because of the formatting, and it still comes together! :heart:
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BerkleyDown Featured By Owner May 5, 2016  Student General Artist
Devastating. But so beautiful.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner May 5, 2016
It's very romantic :)
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