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But the light of a blazing star
falls down to my feet
and burns away the ice encrusting my heart.

Blood starts flowing through my cracked veins,
streaming past long forgotten scars
and slowly a smile blooms-
pale pink lips finally flowering
after a long, harsh winter.

And my tears evaporate
leaving my eyes dry
and the sparks of the star
relights them like a forest fire
the crackling flames roaring
as my soul shakes off the stifling dust
and gleams a pure blinding silver.

Finally the dark recedes,
shadows being chased away,
and for the first time since I drowned
I can breathe again.
^.^ Thank you :iconookami-saru:
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slenderblade Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015
I think this is one of my favorites.
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AtypicalLily Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Student General Artist
v.v Told you people would love it!... It's definitely one of my favourites!
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Glasses-And-Blades Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: Thank you for your faith in me v.v though I still don't think I'm talented - I will accept that I at least have sort of inclination to good with words.
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FrostedQueen Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so awesome! I love it :D
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Ookami-Saru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015
Wow! So wonderful! Still crying cause it directly striked through my heart! Thank you so much for that lines! *sniff*
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Glasses-And-Blades Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! 0.0 Thank you very much for the idea! ^.^ I'm overwhelmingly happy that it could at least mean something to you.
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Ookami-Saru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015
And I'm happy that I was helpful!^^
Really, you spoke my heart with it! 0.0
And hey: Don't make yourself so small! You are talented!
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Glasses-And-Blades Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
It really means a lot that you said that ^-^ Thank you so much! I'm still trying to straighten out my crumpled self-esteem so I can't really see it, yet, but I must have at least some skill if you like it! This poem is yours, too. So I hope you can reflect back on it when you feel down.
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Ookami-Saru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015
Sorry, I'm drifting a little "^^
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Ookami-Saru Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015
Thank you so much^^ I know that problem with the self-esteem... it gets better each day, although you have bad days too, but you must never give up to your negativ thoughts. You decide what will happen to you and all the good will come to you just as you wish for it! And believe me: It will become more and more and even better than you thought! ^^
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